That's just awesome.

Dragged on a bit with all of the needless shouting and nonsense spouting, but it was brilliantly done overall.

I can't wait for more.

Very good, I have to say, but a lot of negative points.

To begin with the positive - your drawing is very good and you seem to have an interesting premise here.

Now on the negative - Animation could have been a lot smoother, and it was almost nothing like an opening. The animation of the bike going along was too bland and nothing like how a bike would actually move.

Short and sweet scenes are in openings, some of those scenes just dragged out a little bit. The animation didn't really suit the song used, so you'd need to work on that. For that song, you'd need a lot of fast-moving scenes with a fair bit of action.

Also - Enchanted Arms much? If you haven't played the game, fair enough, but if you have, that's just blatantly copying it. The main character in Enchanted Arms has an arm that looked exactly like the one Phoen had at the end.

For your first time animating, that is absolutely incredible. It seems like I'm just being a hypocritical ass here, but I'm giving you constructive criticism. I do understand this took a lot of effort and well done for doing it.

I really loved this. Brilliant.

I think more dialogue would be nice, considering the voice acting was incredible.

I'll have to guess that the author isn't great at English, judging from the description, so I'll keep it simple.

It was really good. It really made my day. I was laughing the whole time I was watching it. I liked the KonataxKagami bit. I laughed really hard at the cat's nose bleeding at the tentacle rape part. Thanks for making this.

Psycho Mantis was indeed an incredibly good boss.

I don't think he's really the best boss. I can't think of any series quite like MGS that puts so much emphasis on the background of bosses and EVERY character, so I'll have to leave it at 'Definitely one of the best, if not the best.'

The music was a little bit annoying, with the repeated vocals from the game, but the music definitely suited the whole Psycho Mantis theme. That boss was so damn creepy.

I'm sure I wasn't the only one that was incredibly happy when Psycho Mantis appeared once Screaming Mantis was defeated in MGS4.

Speaking of Screaming Mantis, I think the Beauty and the Beast units were amazing. The way you were told of their backgrounds once they were beaten, it was just immense.

The MGS series does have some of the best bosses out there, no doubt about it.

Brilliant. Bloody brilliant.

Definitely deserves the Best Ever Scoring spot, although a few 0-bombers sure as hell won't let that happen, because they're idiots.

Love it. Can't think of a way to criticise it that doesn't boil down to my own taste, so I'll give it a perfect 10.

I'll vote 5 on it every time I remember, you deserve it.

~Avalon~

That word by itself sounds beautiful, and I think you've done it justice.

I can't wrap my head around this to give constructive criticism, but I do know that it sounds exactly like the title claims. The song isn't perfect, but it is very good. Good work. If you had disgraced the word Avalon I might have punished you.